Searching for fun at the beach is a hard when you've already done everything. Walking through the area, we found a row of garbage bins. A mischievous grin appeared on Dean's face.
"Who says fifty bucks I can jump over all these bins?" He over confidently asked us.
"This is gonna end up well," Sam laughed.
Dean stood up on the grey garbage bin, then took a terrific leap. His foot landed right in the middle of the bottle recycling and slammed right on his face, got a black eye and a bloody nose. But, the first word he said was,
"That... Was awesome!
Creative story! Something I would fix is in the last sentence. You don't need a capital in 'was'. Also, you need the word' the' after 'but' so the sentence would say 'But. the first word he said was," If you can, switch the font to a different colour other than black like your other posts because it's a little hard to read it. Good job! <3
ReplyDeleteDid he stand up and "dab" afterwards?
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