"We could get bitten by a spider, jump into chemicals-"
"No, and absolutely not..." I said blankly. Luke and I were brainstorming ways we could become superheroes, which were actually ways we could die.
"C'mon Ashton," Luke muttered.
“We can't become superheroes, just face it!"
"Anything is possible!” Luke yelled and stormed out of my room.
***
The next day Luke showed up in this ridiculous yellow costume.
"What are you wearing..." I asked, laughing historically
"This is serious, look!" Luke then jumped in the air, and was really flying!
we had fun discovering what other powers Luke had, until he almost died trying to lift up a bus.
I really like your story and the names of the characters you used. Make sure to capitalize the first letter in the beginning of every sentence. I'm a little confused on why there are 3 periods at the end of some sentences because I think they are not needed. You spelled historically instead of hysterically so make sure to fix that. Great story, very creative Sherlock!
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